The Official Writing Challenge
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There's a nice rhythm to this, I like how it builds, and it has such a lovely, reassuring message at the end. Well done!
Wow! I loved this. I'm new to trying poetry, and I like how you used the adverbs. Well done!
I know absolutely nothing about poems, but I enjoy them.
Well done,
This is such a powerful image. I can fell the rain, see it, and even smell it and the message is fantastic. Excellent take on the topic.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
Congratulations on your 4th place finish, Diane.

Similar to a diamante poem, I like the way each stanza builds with increasing intensity.