The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/19
There's a nice rhythm to this, I like how it builds, and it has such a lovely, reassuring message at the end. Well done!
Wow! I loved this. I'm new to trying poetry, and I like how you used the adverbs. Well done!
04/27/19
I know absolutely nothing about poems, but I enjoy them.
Well done,
Blessings~
This is such a powerful image. I can fell the rain, see it, and even smell it and the message is fantastic. Excellent take on the topic.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
05/05/19
Congratulations on your 4th place finish, Diane.

Similar to a diamante poem, I like the way each stanza builds with increasing intensity.