The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Amazing take on the old story. When I first heard the topic was rain, I thought that there would be a lot of entries on Noah, but yours is the first I've read. Some alluded to him, but not the actual tale. You made it out of the box for sure! Well done!
04/27/19
Well done!

Blessings~
I really like the original take on the topic. I also often wonder what other characters from the Bible must have thought or felt. You do a great job with Noah's wife. I noticed quite a few minor punctuation errors (commas, em dashes, ellipses, semicolons). My favorite online resource is
https://guidetogrammar.org/grammar/marks/marks.htm
It covers all of the punctuation and gives great explanations of each. I think you nailed the topic in a fresh way. It has a great message of faith too. You did a fine job developing the characters and painting a picture for the reader.
Congratulations on ranking 15th overall. Happy Dance!