The Official Writing Challenge
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You've written some amazing imagery here. Great take on the biblical story.
04/27/19
Great job with this!
Well done,
Blessings~
04/27/19
Your writing puts majesty to the powerful words of the prophet and paints the picture so clearly that even Ahab could see it. Blessings.
04/29/19
I enjoyed your vivid descriptions. One place that threw me, however, is when you described the sound of rain as a machine gun's ratta-tat-tat. Since this is a Biblical account, a machine gun doesn't fit the piece since machine guns didn't exist yet. Other than that, I love your writing.
This is a powerful piece. The descriptions are so intense. You made me see the story with new eyes. Great job.
Vivid descriptions. You made me see it all. Well done.
05/02/19
Wow! "Wonderful descriptions! Congratulations on your win!
05/02/19
Congratulations on placing third place this week, Dave.

You create vivid pictures with words.
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!