The Official Writing Challenge
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You've written some amazing imagery here. Great take on the biblical story.
Great job with this!
Well done,
Your writing puts majesty to the powerful words of the prophet and paints the picture so clearly that even Ahab could see it. Blessings.
I enjoyed your vivid descriptions. One place that threw me, however, is when you described the sound of rain as a machine gun's ratta-tat-tat. Since this is a Biblical account, a machine gun doesn't fit the piece since machine guns didn't exist yet. Other than that, I love your writing.
This is a powerful piece. The descriptions are so intense. You made me see the story with new eyes. Great job.
Vivid descriptions. You made me see it all. Well done.
Wow! "Wonderful descriptions! Congratulations on your win!
Congratulations on placing third place this week, Dave.

You create vivid pictures with words.
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!