The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/19
Poems are not my favorite medium of conveying an idea, but this was so well written and thought out. I really enjoyed the imagery and the contrast of the 'family members'.
Great imagery- I could see the commands being doled out. Love the surly sister rain name.
04/25/19
Beautiful imagery and comparison of both kinds of rain. I could hear them and feel them... and loved both.
Your words paint such a lovely picture. I could see the rain nourishing the plants and trees. Well done!
04/27/19
Your masterful use of imagery had me wanting to close my eyes and see. But then I wouldn't be able to read. lol. This is really beautiful.
04/27/19
Beautiful!

Blessings~

This is lovely yet powerful. I have to smile because I just took a picture of the very first buds of green in my yard, announcing triumphantly that spring is here! I woke up this morning to see snow trying to cover the green grass. Your piece took me through those feelings once again. Your mental pictures are fantastic and the message so profound.
04/29/19
Nice imagery in this lovely poem. Well done.
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!