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04/18/19
The message that we are all cripples is so very powerful. And that because of a blood covenant with the King of kings, we have a place at His table. Nothing we ever did to earn it. What a glorious hope!
Amazing analogy! So much to think about. Well done!
04/18/19
Great parallels here, though (minor red ink) the suspense might have run even deeper if you had just used "Summoned" as a title.
This is really powerful. Your description of the dropping made my heart hammer as it was so realistic. This is a great extension of Biblical fiction that helps people like me understand the Bible better. You don't need to add the Bible verse in the middle of the story, but instead you could use an asterisk and a footnote. The take on the topic was spot in. Your message is clear and powerful. I could see a book of these stories for a great Bible study.
04/19/19
Wonderful depiction of the story and fantastic comparison to the way God looks at us. What a merciful King we serve.