The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. Here's a gentle hug. Your current life is so hard for you, yet you express yourself so well. I doubt very many people live the life they had imagined. Praying for you, my friend.
I really like this. It flows so nicely. I usually struggle with hearing rhythm, but picked it up easily in this powerful piece. I can relate to so much. The last line is my favorite and an attitude people living with chronic illness (and really everyone in some way or another) have to do.
04/18/19
Pain and promise - brought together so smoothly in such a credible way. Great work.
04/19/19
Beautiful.
04/20/19
So beautifullly executed. The title alone speaks volumes; it drew me to click on the link and I wasn’t dissapointed, even though poetry isn’t usually my thing. And, it flows very smoothly.
This is a wonderful poem--creative, with a great message and excellent rhythm and rhyme.
Love the title and last line.
It flows smoothly and the rhyme is very good. Nicely done.
04/24/19
Such a thought-provoking poem. Thank you!
04/25/19
How beautifully said. Not only love the writing, but the message too. A well-deserved win!
04/25/19
Oh... no wonder you got first place! This is beautiful... so lovely . . . so tender.
Told ya it was great! Teehee. Happy Dance!