The Official Writing Challenge
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Great imaginative material that invites us to keep our eyes on Jesus - no matter what.
What an imagination you have!
You have some wonderful imagery in this piece. The conflict pulled me in right away. The main red ink, I'd offer would be to go back and count how many times you use exclamation points. Instead of punctuation, let your excellent word choice do your exclaiming for you. This is a nice take on the topic. Fresh and original.