The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/19
It is obvious that you, also did your homework. I enjoyed this story.
04/11/19
Wonderful writing and full of truth. Well done.
I love this smart grandpa and your story about him. This is a delightful way to show God's proof that "Youth is not wasted on the young."
04/12/19
Touching and well done!
Blessings~
04/12/19
A positive rebuke, but I can't help wondering if the teacher had learned his lesson for the next day...;-)
Great way to tell the stories of Biblical youth. Well done!
04/15/19
Ooh, I like this unique take on the topic. You drew me right in to this well written story. Well done!
You drew me in right away with the twins running, introducing the conflict. I thought the resolution of it was great. Oh how times have changed in so many ways. I enjoyed the lesson. It was a creative take on the topic and a great message.
Loved the way you used biblical truths to illustrate youth is not wasted on the young. Loved Grandpa, too. Well done.