The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/19
I love this story of how God is faithful to our prayers. Good writing. God bless.
This is a great and fresh take on the Beautitudes. I liked how you mixed body language, thoughts, and dialog to bring the story to life.
03/15/19
Well done, nice job with the topic. Thank you.
Blessings~
03/15/19
Had me on the edge of my seat. I really liked your descriptions. A couple formatting errors and a typo caught my eye, but nothing that another go-around of proofing wouldn't fix. I especially liked how you used water within the story - raging as torrential rain, then later peacefully washing Peter clean. Nicely done.
03/16/19
You hooked me and had me wondering what would happen next. I can see this story being expanded beyond the word count limit that's required for the challenge. I think it would be really gripping.
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!
I'm really late on my comments, but trying to get caught up. All I can say is Wow! Amazing story of redemption. Well done!