The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this story of how God is faithful to our prayers. Good writing. God bless.
This is a great and fresh take on the Beautitudes. I liked how you mixed body language, thoughts, and dialog to bring the story to life.
Well done, nice job with the topic. Thank you.
Had me on the edge of my seat. I really liked your descriptions. A couple formatting errors and a typo caught my eye, but nothing that another go-around of proofing wouldn't fix. I especially liked how you used water within the story - raging as torrential rain, then later peacefully washing Peter clean. Nicely done.
You hooked me and had me wondering what would happen next. I can see this story being expanded beyond the word count limit that's required for the challenge. I think it would be really gripping.
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!
I'm really late on my comments, but trying to get caught up. All I can say is Wow! Amazing story of redemption. Well done!