The Official Writing Challenge
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This is awesome. The dialog moves the story forward at just the right pace. I fell in love with Harriet (whom I'd fondly call an lol--which stood for lil ole lady long before laugh out loud). She is such a gem of a character. Both characters were well developed and touched my heart.
Loved this and Harriet!
You could write an entire book about Harriet for sure.

Thank you.

I love this touching story. Harriet is a gem, I enjoyed the interaction between the two women, and it had a great ending. Well done. :)
I really liked this. Both characters were so believable. I could identify with both of them. I'm making myself go to a women's event this weekend and will try to listen to the Lord's promptings instead of wishing I was home with a book.
I'm really late on my comments, but trying to get caught up. I loved this story! Great reminder on how to appreciate what we have. Well done!