The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/19
This is a beautiful page of profound love expressed in words. I know so little about writing poetry that I have no technical comments to offer to help you improve...only that it's lovely. Thanks for sharing.
03/07/19
Really identified with verses 4 and 8 of this psalm. Worth reading again. . . and again.
03/08/19
Such a beautiful message...

"To be absent from this body is to be present with You
Blessed by grace that proceeds endlessly from above
My heart yearns burns and cries out for You alone
Yet time is not a foe because Eternity is a reality"

I do not like 'reality TV.'
I do believe in the reality of eternity in the Father's house.

Wing His Words
03/09/19
Well I am trying to figure out which verse resonated the most deeply with me, perhaps 6 or 8 or perhaps just all of them. This was really enjoyable and uplifting to read. Thank you and well done.
Beautiful words. The story goes that my paternal grandmother died with her fingers touching that verse about absent from body and present with the Lord. I also long for that day!
03/11/19
An open-hearted, inspiring devotional message. Well done.
This is a beautiful piece. It soothes my soul. The message is profound too.