The Official Writing Challenge
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You "showed" the topic well, and I was glad the young man made the right choice in the end.
03/08/19
Well done, and I was relieved with the conclusion and the choices made.

Thank you,

Blessings~
Well done. But did dad die? I loved how you introduced Sam. Out loud, I said "oooh, smarmy!"
03/12/19
I liked the conflict and suspense in your story, and then the happy ending.