The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/19
Nothing to say except this made me smile. Thank you.
Beautiful. The rhyme is lovely and the message even more lovely. Well done.
I knew exactly where this was going, for I also did a similar poem many years ago. It flowed so nicely. Well done!
Such wonderful love described, and indeed, you "got me" with the ending. Such a clever title, too. I agree with you completely. Great job!
03/08/19
So pristine and beautiful!

Loved it,

Blessings~
03/08/19
What a lovely poem, with nice rhythm and rhyme, and a great ending. Well done!
03/08/19
Just lovely. It flows so well.
03/09/19
This is good. I like it. I wasn't quite sure where the ending was going, but I figured there would be a "twist" of some sort. Nice job.
03/10/19
Absolutely beautiful. I was wondering where the spiritual message was going to come in, but when the twist came, it made the rest of the poem even more beautiful.
03/11/19
I loved this! Beautiful!
03/14/19
Congrats!
Blessings~
03/14/19
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Marianne.

I didn't know you wrote poetry, but this is well done.
03/14/19
I'm sorry I spelled your name incorrectly (Auto correct made me doubt myself)
03/15/19
Congratulations!