The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/19
Powerful!
Well done,
Blessings~
I've not heard that before- W.I.N. -when in need, pray. Cool!
02/26/19
A clever acrostic lesson wrapped inside a very descriptive and very credible story.
02/27/19
Sometimes losing someone we love causes a great void in our life and we turn to other things like alcohol to fill it.

I'm glad the main character took the first step. I like the WIN acrostic because it is easy to remember.
02/28/19
Good to see you are writing again, Graham. I still have a couple of your stories saved in my favorites.
This is really powerful. You did a great job of introducing the conflict right away. I liked the resolution too. It wasn't tied up in a pretty bow but felt so real. I'm so happy to see you writing again. Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!