The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/19
Suspenseful and spell binding storytelling. The ending was unexpected.
Very Frank Peretti- ish! Well done!
02/22/19
Extremely well written and thought provoking. I discovered even more when I read it through a second time, putting all the pieces together. Clever and original.
02/22/19
Great job with the topic in this well written story in content an delivery.

Blessings~
02/26/19
Graphic and compelling story in its suspense and its simple summary of truth to close. Well done.