The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this!
Beautiful, meaningful and powerful.
Thank you,
This is so lovely. I may print it, frame it, and put it by my door. Before I became too sick, my house was so clean, but when the time came to decide to spend limited energy with my kids or cleaning my house, it was a no-brainer. I now have the three most amazing, independent adult children. My house can still be as messy, but you reminded me of what is most important on a day where I definitely needed reminding. Thank you for listening to the Holy Spirit and making my day so much better.
Very good reminder of what is really important. Thanks, this was perfect.
This is so poignant, without being sad. Beautiful!
Congratulations on your 4th place finish, Francy.

Your last line summed up the poem beautifully.
God Bless~