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02/14/19
Loved your story, well written and truth resounded throughout.
Thank you.

Just for your info, the Bible scripture you have at close is one that greets everyone who walks into our home.

Blessings~
This is a delightful read. You introduced the conflicts, and I became invested in your story right away. It reminded me of when I a single mom, aged 23, bought my first house. It needed work too, but became a friend, and I still miss that first house of my very own. I think you did a nice job of adding the clear Christian message at the end too.
02/19/19
Heart-warming story of a journey through much tribulation.
"Many are the afflictions of the righteous, but the Lord delivered them all."
Oh, I can Identify with you! My story is very similar, except my condo was 20 years old, but it good condition when I first purchased it. Great story.
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall. Happy Dance!