The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/19
What a neat idea, to show us the topic through the words of a child practicing an oral report. I also like how you wove in the topic in a number of different ways.

This story made me smile in places, and it also made me think. It's sad how many kids grow up in difficult environments.

Well done!
02/15/19
Nice approach to the topic which you nailed beautifully.
God bless~
02/19/19
Your story warmed my heart.
02/20/19
I absolutely love this story. It's squarely on topic. It's a thought-provoking reminder that our kids' friends are aware of everything in our homes, not just the furnishings. I agree your approach in using the school report was just what was called for in this entry. May it be a true story in homes across the globe.
Cute story! I think the speech seemed more mature than would demonstrate from a 5th grader. Great take on the topic!
02/21/19
This story grabbed at my heart strings. So many children go to an empty house and have adult responsibilities.
02/21/19
Hello Dear Shann!

Congratulations on 20th place overall!

As you say...doing a "happy dance!"

God bless~
02/21/19
Hello Dear Shann!

Congratulations on 20th place overall!

As you say...doing a "happy dance!"

God bless~