The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/19
Good message.Very creative.
02/14/19
Good message.Very creative.
02/15/19
Nicely done,
Blessings~
02/15/19
Well Done! From beginning to end! And very entertaining.
02/15/19
I really enjoyed your poem and the dialect you used. I particularly liked the short stanzas and especially the last one. You've told a story in a creative, rhyming, rollicking way. Well done!
What a delight. Your dialog rocketed me across decades and continents to a new world that felt familiar by your vivid pictures that your words painted.
02/17/19
The best poem and most authentic I've heard in a while. I love this. Great job.
02/19/19
Just perfect.
This fun poem worked as a rap cadence- so unique!