The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/19
Beautiful!
Blessings~
This is beautiful. Poetry isn't my favorite genre, but this really touched my heart. There's so much wisdom in this lovely poem. My favorite line is "Where mess just means there’s action
There’s some living getting done." I may use that line to explain my house! It made me chuckle.
So true-everyone needs a home!
02/21/19
Well written poem, Vincent. I really liked the comparison of house versus home.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!