The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done, thank you.
God bless~
This is really interesting. You have some great details in here. If I didn't know the topic, I'd have guessed hands. You do mention the word home, but it doesn't feel that it is throughout the entire story. Although I can see an out-of-the-box idea of home in the title. I liked the imagery of the centurian. The message at the end is powerful and beautiful.
A thought provoking piece - even if it's not very on topic. Well thought out.
I'm left-handed and wondered where this was going! I don't see the "Home" topic, however. You could h have worked this for the "Feet" topic.
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!