The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/19
Loved the ending! Good descriptions placing me in your seat struggling with the maze of the city through a paper map.
02/07/19
I love Dad's ulterior motive in challenging his daughter to help her grow. What a wise and wonderful father. Well done.
02/08/19
Part of me likes your dad and part of me thinks he's a jerk, lol! Very cool story. A touch overcooked in places, but overall a fun read, and a terrific ending. Nice work.
You grabbed my attention right away and kept it right to the end. I really got a glimpse into the family in that car and the faith the father had in his child. No need to connect that to a Christian message since it's so clear. Nicely done.
Oh my gosh, what a scary situation! Los Angeles is bad enough, I can't even fathom navigating NYC! Well done.
02/14/19
I enjoyed this immensely.
Thank you,
God bless~
02/14/19
Congrats Brenda on your win. Great job. I love this.
02/17/19
Congratulations on your EC for this! I was torn between thinking this was a good move for the father to let the MC navigate and thinking that it was too hard a task, in NYC no less! But, it worked and no-one got injured, and it made for a great story! I remember our family, from Australia, driving into NYC on the right side of the road (when we drive on the left) and how harrowing it was - but that's another story! Well written!