The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/19
Ambitious. Strong premise, nicely-executed. I enjoyed the dialect, and loved the map/quilt connection. Good work.
Love the voice in this piece. Good message, too. Well done.
02/08/19
The dialogue sounded authentic pulling me into captivating story. Well done.
I totally agree with Francie. It was so well done I felt sure it could be a great novel.
Your novelist abilities shine here. May this become one. You made an old story real.
You did an outstanding job with developing the characters. The dialog feels authentic but isn't too hard to read. I love the idea of the quilt being the map. Very creative and touching.
Interesting story- dialogue right on. Good job!
02/12/19
Very interesting piece and a completely different take on the topic.

One thing - it is summer time passed, not past.
02/14/19
This touched my heart!
Thank you,
God bless~
02/14/19
Congrats Yvonne on your 3rd place win!
02/14/19
Congratulations on your 3rd place win! I You used beautiful descriptions that let me see the story well.
02/17/19
Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Yvonne.

Well developed characters and a nicely told story. Your dialect was well done; I know that's difficult to do.