The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story. Thought I was going to make it through the day without tearing up but you managed to get me. Thanks. Good writing.
02/07/19
Oh my goodness, what a tender and heart rendering story. And what a gift to see the beauty in moments no matter where they are.
02/07/19
Very nice. Strong sentiment, wonderfully expressed. Solid craftsmanship, perfect pacing. I don't see how it could be improved - and I'm a nitpicker! Great work.
A beautiful picture of selfless love, an enduring love.
Ahh this is such a sweet story. It choked me up and painted a beautiful picture of love.
This brought tears- well done!
02/12/19
What a wonderful piece! Loved it from beginning to end.
02/12/19
I loved your sweet story. It was a creative idea for the topic, and you told it beautifully.
02/13/19
Precious! Thank you for writing this beautiful story of love.
02/13/19
Awww! Loved this!
Thank you.

God bless~
02/20/19
Beautiful story!
03/01/19
What a lovely story of true selfless love. I really enjoyed it.