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02/07/19
Interesting and informative with a valuable spiritual lesson at the end. Well done.
I appreciate your spiritual application by comparison. So many earthly messes can parallel our spiritual stumbles. A good reminder to never be careless in our journey with Jesus.
02/07/19
Ambitious. Kudos to you on pulling it off. Covered a lot of ground. Nice craftwork.
This was a compelling story. I wasn't aware of the history and found it fascinating. I like your take on the topic. Your message at the end definitely fits the new rule about having a clear Christian message. In my opinion, it might have felt a wee bit added on, yet the message itself is a strong one, and one that is needed even more in today's world.
Powerful story! Had me in tears at the death scene.
02/12/19
This was so interesting! Yes, we are under a different plague today, a spiritual one - I agree.
02/13/19
Powerful entry in content and delivery!
Thank you,
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!