The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow-what a story! Sound like your journey has only just begun! I like your opening line about the seas.
This is a great story about how God can use horrible circumstances in our lives and turn them into something to glorify him. I noticed some tiny things like none instead of nonexistent and a semicolon that didn't separate two independent clauses. Overall you did a great job of writing on topic. Your ending is powerful. As someone with chronic pain, I relate to the loneliness, sadness, and fear. Your message spoke to my heart.
01/27/19
Thank you for encouraging me! Just out of cancer treatments and some permanent side effects, I needed that "Chariot of God" to bring me back to my faith. Excellent story...well done!
01/31/19
Absolutely! He can use you. This story proves it in that you have already used your trial for His glory. Thank you for sharing such a deeply painful and personal experience.
I'm so happy to see you back here writing again. I've missed you so much and your stories have always touched my heart! I reread your story again and felt like it could have been wrirren for me, especially the sad, lonely, and afraid part. The Holy Spirit used your words to give me a hug today, right at the perfect time, when darkness was invading my being and winning the war. Thank you, my friend, for being brave enough to write your story, for entering, and for listening to the Holy Spirit.