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Oh, I loved this story! Kids can be so literal. I can't quite place the age of Wrigley, unless I missed it in the first reading. But she seemed knowledgeable yet very immature. Good you got your story submitted.
01/25/19
This story made me chuckle. I could picture this little girl. I like how you revealed her age to us. It was a fun take on the topic. Good job!
01/26/19
I'm laughing. This was a great story.
01/27/19
I absolutely loved this story!
It was so adorable and grabbed my attention from the moment I started reading it.

The little MC was a typical youngster with raw open honesty and questioning.

You should publish and get these stories out to others to enjoy and read.

You nailed the topic and I love your message about Jesus.

Great content and delivery!
Thank you.

God Bless
01/31/19
Terrific! You've done a great job capturing both the concrete thinking of the little girl and the challenge it poses for the adults in her life. Delightful read.