The Official Writing Challenge
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I knew what was coming when you took the lower priced shoes. Oh how you must have suffered, but what a great lesson!
I delighted in this story. Alaska is my dream destination, but the only way I'd shoot a bear would be with a camera! Although it was obvious what would happen, you still did a great job of carrying the story. The ending was strong and a powerful message.
I like how you have taken us with you on the trail of the bears, and brought in a clear devotional parallel.
I loved your story, and quite a lesson, it was! I could feel the pain and misery you were going through, ouch! You tied it up nicely at the end talking about God's instructions are more important than mere suggestions. Well done!
A well told cautionary tale of folly and of learning one’s lessons the painful, blistery way. The analogies are spot on and well stated. Great job!
Beautifully expressed!

Congratulations on your well deserved EC!

Thank you,
God bless~