The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/19
Nice story. I love the symbolism and surprise element in revealing the Bible and the woman's age.
Thanks for sharing.
Kay
01/24/19
I was emmersed in this mystery and carried along of her discovery. I enjoyed this thoroughly. Great work!
01/25/19
I really enjoyed this story. You have revealed the woman's story slowly and subtly through Chang Mae's discoveries. I think the title is very well chosen as the woman has been a spreader of the gospel, one of those who bring good news. Very well told.
01/25/19
Graphic and moving account, with your title only hinting at the power of this story. Great work.
This is a powerful story. I enjoyed the open-ended ending too. You did a great job with developing all of the characters. Your descriptions brought many vivid pictures to my mind and even some smells. Outstanding job.
Wow, this gave me goosebumps! I was hooked from the start. Well done.
I was fascinated and captured by the story. I kept thinking the pieces of the puzzle would come together about the life of this woman, but by the conclusion I had more questions than answers about her. Reading the other’s comments made me feel like a dunce, but I still can’t put the pieces together to understand the story.
01/31/19
Congratulations on winning 2nd place, Tracy.

What a hauntingly beautiful piece of writing. May we never forget the lives of martyrs whose sacrifice has been used by God to further the spread of the gospel message.
02/01/19
Tracy!

Congratulations on your win for this intricately woven and deeply compelling story that left me mesmerized!

Fabulous and ingenious way of approaching the topic head on, with an overly powerful message.

Thank you,

God bless~