The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/19
A wonderful Bible lesson about the two "Marys." Your descriptive phrases also added to the emotion of each paragraph. Great job!
01/25/19
Uplifting, descriptive and creative approach to the topic. well done.
This is a powerful piece. You did a great job of making this common theme this week (Jesus' feet) and making it fresh and thrilling to read. I could feel your passion and your words touched my heart.
This kind of reminded me of the song "Mary did you know?" Very poignant.
I loved the first sentence in the last paragraph!! It brought the whole piece full circle.
01/31/19
I missed this the first time around. I’m so grateful to read it now! The devotion of the two Mary’s, especially Magdala, spoke to me as I’ve felt the Lord’s whisper that I’ve need to sit at His feet more. Thank you! And, congratulations!
01/31/19
Congratulations Dave - well deserved
01/31/19
Congratulations Dave - well deserved
01/31/19
Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place finish, Dave. Your smooth transitions between descriptions was flawless.
01/31/19
Great piece of writing Dave, well done!
Praise God for this piece which runs so deep. The clouds are the dust of His feet...wow.
02/01/19
Congratulations for a fine story that was worthy of its win!

God Bless~
02/06/19
Congratulations Dave! This is well deserving of its 1st place EC. You've used the topic really well, drawing together so much.