The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/19
Right on topic, and oh so precious! Brought back many memories for me. Great job!
The most wonderful thing a mother could ever want for her baby - to walk the streets of gold. Lovve this!
01/25/19
You have echoed and encapsulated the prayers and hopes of every new parent - or grandparent like me. Well done.
01/25/19
This is SO precious. You've captured the feelings of mothers who kiss the tiny, soft feet of their newborn, thankful that all the toes are there, dimpled and sweet. What a tender, loving entry. I so hope you win!!
01/25/19
What a sweet poem. I like how you used the topic of feet through a lifetime and beyond to the streets of gold.
01/25/19
As the queen of bad poetry I can recognise good poetry when I see it. This is lovely!
01/25/19
This captures the deep love and hope, mothers and grandmothers share to their babies as they kiss each sweet.
Beautiful poem. Beautiful read.
This is beautiful. It brought images of the many newborn footprints I took when I worked in labor and delivery. They do grow so fast. This would be great on a plague with an image of those newborn footprints behind it.
Such a sweet sentimental piece, every parents’ prayer.
Very sweet and upbeat piece.
01/31/19
A very touching and beautiful poem. I love the prayer for walking on streets of gold. It is what we all want most for our kids.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
01/31/19
Congratulations on placing 4th in this weeks EC challenge, Verna.

As you know, I'm a big fan of your work. I pray as you do that many will follow in Christ's footsteps.
02/01/19
Congratulations Verna!
Lovely poem.
God BLess~