The Official Writing Challenge
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Brilliant! I can say no more.
I absolutely LOVE this!
01/17/19
BEAUTIFUL You swept me away from beginning to end. Masterful work.
01/19/19
Oh my! Love this.
01/19/19
Oh my! Love this.
01/19/19
Oh my! Love this.
01/19/19
Oh my! Love this.
01/19/19
Oh my! Love this.
01/20/19
Wow! I'm trying to work out which stanza was the best. Perhaps the second last one - talk is like bubbles drifting away, popping and leaving nothing tangible and substantial behind. Great piece of writing.
At first, I thought that this should be titled "Someday," but when I got to the end, your title made sense. Well done!
01/21/19
Beautiful!
Enjoyed this, thank you.
God bless~
01/22/19
Great writing here. I love the word pictures - especially at the beginning. Well done.
Powerfully written. Great word picture in that second to last paragraph. Thank you for the inspiring message.
Powerfully written. Great word picture in that second to last paragraph. Thank you for the inspiring message.
01/24/19
Francy, this beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes. I'll be saving it amongst my favorites. Thank you for sharing it and congratulations on your EC which was so very well-deserved!
01/27/19
Oh! Oh! Oh! How I LOVE this! I’ve often thought the same when watching some of the various escapades on TV where mankind is pushing the edge of experience.

But for a few of those, the eternal ability is soar lays empty because they did not choose it. But rather chased bucket lists and human achievement. Thank you for writing this! It’s deeply moving.