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01/17/19
It's jaw dropping anyone would do such a thing. What a scoundrel. I noticed you did a POV shift starting with Martin's POV in the beginning, then later in the story you switch to Jenny's.
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
01/17/19
Verna, no she didn't send him half of her income tax refund. She wouldn't have even if he'd sent her his new address (which he never did).
01/17/19
This is a true story, by the way.

01/17/19
I was antsy to see where this was going. On topic and well told, though I'm sorry to see the guy turned out to be such a crumb.
01/18/19
You have summed up the topic so well - and so brutally. I hope you are well-rewarded for it - almost as much as I hope Martin gets what's due to him.
What a sad witness from someone who claimed to be a Christian. Thank you for sharing this.
Interesting read! I would have been distrustful of a 21 year old man in the first place-still very immature. Sad that things like this do happen.
01/19/19
What a sad story. Those 60 words broke my heart too, especially knowing it's true.
01/21/19
My heart ached while reading this well written entry.

Thank you for sharing with us.

God BLess~
I wish you could hear me screaming as I read. This is a too-common event. You grabbed my attention and held it to the end. Just last night my husband and I were talking. People have asked him why he stays with me given my health conditions. I've got a good hubby because he is dumbfounded that anyone would even think that for better or worse doesn't actually mean you stay even during the hard times. I could totally relate to this MC!
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!