The Official Writing Challenge
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This is delightful.
Kids who don't learn to keep promises usually turn into irresponsible adults .
01/19/19
You described my kids. And my teenage room! Now I miss those days. Sweet/frustrating memories. :) Nice job!
Boys. What IS a mom to do? Very entertaining. Love the last line.
01/21/19
So many will relate to this well written entry.
God bless~
01/23/19
It's so hard to get good domestic help nowadays, and I love how you have heaped up the whole scenario into one cluttered paragraph - literally a word-picture all its own. Well done.
I can definitely relate to this one. Ahh I miss yelling at my kids to pick up their rooms. Of course now that they are on their own, they pick up their houses! You made me smile.
Congratulations on ranking 16 overall. Happy Dance!
01/25/19
Are you sure you weren't describing my sons? This describes them to a "T."
I love your general tone about raising kids, which every parent can relate to. Beautifully crafted piece !