The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
Love that you had a different take on 'Shop'. And funny too - loved the building could have been on fire line.
01/10/19
I appreciate a funny story, and this one made me laugh. I like how you used the topic in two different ways, too. Nice ending. Well done.
Great story! Is the teacher's name a play on Bruce Willis?
01/10/19
I LOVED IT ! One of my favorite lines was, "You could have driven a small car through her gaping mouth." Funny !!! Also, " 'Please call me Will.' "Calling him gorgeous would have been more accurate." You wrote outside the box, for sure, but what an interesting take on "Shop." At the beginning I wondered how you'd make a Christian connection with making a bird house, but you segued into the "Jesus was a carpenter," and "Will you go to church with me on Sunday?" with a bit of humor, yet you were serious. This is a great entry!
01/10/19
Love your originality! Pretty funny.
01/10/19
I love the humor, but it also left me wanting to know more. This feels like the beginning of a humorous novella.
01/11/19
Great job!
I enjoyed this whole piece.

Thank you.
God bless~
01/17/19
I loved this story, and the twist at the end. This is why I love reading your books. Congratulations on a great win!
01/17/19
I loved this story, and the twist at the end. This is why I love reading your books. Congratulations on a great win!