The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
Your final line made me laugh!
01/10/19
Snort. Crack me up. :)
What an ending! ( I let out a loud groan) Fun story and well-done.
This made me smile more than once. The ending was priceless. Wrong store. hehe.
01/10/19
It was a laugh a minute. Just when I thought I couldn't take one more hysterical line, you slammed me with the zinger in your last line. What a hoot. I LOVED the image of hooking some guy with your umbrella handle. Then your yelling "Legalist" had me roaring. This was worth reading at 2:13 a.m. even though I'll have a hard time settling down to sleep now. GREAT JOB !
01/11/19
Great job! Entertaining and witty.

God bless~
01/11/19
This is absolutely hilarious. Your descriptions were clever and the story entertained till the very end.
01/12/19
You have a gift for humor. I enjoyed this story.
01/12/19
I loved this story! You've told it with great wit and humor and it kept me engaged right through. This is great writing. Well done!
01/13/19
Enjoyable and entertaining. Kept me intrigued to the end!
01/15/19
Such a hoot! Thank you for many great chuckles!