The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely word picture you've drawn. I read it through twice and was amazed at how beautifully you described the dark night opening to a brilliant new dawn, surely a gift from a loving God. Well done !
This is beautiful. You're a true artist, the paper your canvas, your words the paint. I thought it quite clever to tie in another meaning of broken. It's fresh and invigorating.
Lovely, truly lovely.
Congratulations Verna! Again you have written poetry of beauty and wonder. You have painted a beautiful word picture with great skill.