The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/18
What a great way to make your point at the end. I could picture the students throughout the story. Well written.
What a delightful story with a wonderful lesson. I didn't have any trouble visualizing those dirty desks from your descriptive writing. Excellent narrative!
12/07/18
A well-told story. There was just one phrase that you might want to re-think: '. . .but if our lives are always kept free from sin. . . ' I can see this story being used in a Sunday school paper. Do we still have Sunday school papers??
12/13/18
What a great illustration of an important truth. Congrats on your win!
Wow what a beautiful story. I had tears in my eyes. I could see where you were going but still was holding my breath the entire time. Put standing message. Congratulations on your HC. Happy Dance!