The Official Writing Challenge
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His strength is made perfect in our weakness! You truly brought it home and to life. I love the skillfully written descriptive language - all the analogies and word pictures and such beautiful imagry. I could actually see it, feel it, live it.

I also love the way that up until the fourth paragraph it seems to be a personal story. Then in the beginning of the fourth paragraphm the reader is wondering, Could it possibly be...."and by the end of the fourth paragraph the reader begins to REALLY get it. Hooked. It's like a flower that keeps blooming more and more.

Great job. I hope you are writing full books in this manner.
12/07/18
Love this! Referring to Peter as Rocky! I enjoyed the reading beginning to end. I liked your descriptions, "The net was alive." The telling of the story from Peter's point of view was awesome. I wanted more Jesus. So really it served wonderfully, after all isn't that the point of good story telling? If we leave a reader wanting more Jesus then we have used our talents well!
Thank you!
12/08/18
This is impressive writing. You hooked me with the word pictures. I didn't realize it was a Bible story until 2/3 of the way through. Smart storytelling!
12/13/18
I love this. Congrats on your win!
This is a great story. You hooked me right away and reeled me in at the end. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!