The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice twist on the Cinderella story. A little dialogue between the prince and someone else concerning his 'need' would have filled in what felt like a "dry spot" or a "gap" to me. Overall I enjoyed it.
What if everyone who posted in Challenge entries also commented on/critiqued at least three others? I'm shocked that so many post, and so few read and post a review for others. It seems only a few people have the courtesy to critique but would like the critiques on their own. I am new here, and originally was excited about this site. If you are one who DOES regularly read and comment on others work, then may the Lord bless you mightily and publish you quickly.
This is cute.

The ending was a bit... jarring for me. I'd suggest tying it into the "fantasy" world a bit more... Something like, "Did you know the King of Kings since the Prince of Peace to save you?" or something like that. It's a simple change, but it feels more fitting.

Overall, great job on this.