The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my ggodness you're a wonderful writer, even more so if you are young like Maggie. You have quite a few punctuation mistakes. A free online program called Grammarly will correct those punctuation mistakes for you and you'd also learn from it. I love what you've written. It is beautiful. Thank you.
What if everyone who posted in Challenge entries also commented on/critiqued at least three others? I'm shocked that so many post, and so few read and post a review for others. It seems only a few people have the courtesy to critique but would like the critiques on their own. I am new here, and originally was excited about this site. If you are one who DOES regularly read and comment on others work, then may the Lord bless you mightily and publish you quickly.
11/24/18
A lovely story with great dialogue and a good message.
Really enjoyed this. Has the ring of truth and compassion and love and grace. So relatable to so many. Great job.
A very lovely story of true beauty, told in a lighthearted manner. I liked it.