The Official Writing Challenge
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Ha Ha! Funny! Enjoyed this a lot. And I think the word "she" should be "she's" in the following line: She hooked on her, there is no cure. (Right?)
What if everyone who posted in Challenge entries also commented on/critiqued at least three others? I'm shocked that so many post, and so few read and post a review for others. It seems only a few people have the courtesy to critique but would like the critiques on their own. I am new here, and originally was excited about this site. If you are one who DOES regularly read and comment on others work, then may the Lord bless you mightily and publish you quickly.
11/25/18
Loved it. Seeing the speck in your sister's and not the beam in yours. Haha.
A clever idea, especially showing the vanity of a male too.