The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a smile all wrapped up in truth. I really enjoyed it!
11/23/18
Seems like a simple little verse at first, but it reveals deep truth. It's very nicely done.
What if everyone who posted in Challenge entries also commented on/critiqued at least three others? I'm shocked that so many post, and so few read and post a review for others. It seems only a few people have the courtesy to critique but would like the critiques on their own. I am new here, and originally was excited about this site. If you are one who DOES regularly read and comment on others work, then may the Lord bless you mightily and publish you quickly.
11/27/18
Love this poem! When people ask me what someone looks like I can never remember. But I do remember what kind of personality they have. Yes, beauty is in the heart.
You said it well, God bless!
11/27/18
Claudia, your point is well taken. I do try to comment on a few entries each week and sometimes I send personal messages to the writer rather than post it here. But thank you for the reminder.