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A good story and I liked the twist at the end.
This is a cute story. I scratched my head at the beginning when it was mentioned they were identical twins. Obviously they can't be identical if one is a boy and one a girl (Unless you bring transgender into the mix). I winced slightly when you used stereotypical things like the boy being better in math and boys playing football and girls being cheerleaders, but you did a nice job of fighting through those stereotypes in the end. I like your message. It came through nicely and you did a good job of writing on topic. Good job.