The Official Writing Challenge
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Funny! You got me! Cleverly written and yet with a good message.
10/13/18
Well done,
Blessings~
10/16/18
Very clever. THanks and well done.
10/18/18
Great story! I was intrigued by the title. I know of Plato's allegory and this was an appropriate modern application. I think I figured out the TV part when you wrote that "Bernice's father died three days before they got married." :) I like the idea of creating connections you wrote in the author's note.
And congratulations on your EC! :)