The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story! Well written.
You did a great job of building the suspense while creating some great mental pictures. This is a hard topic to write about, but important to let people know it can happen in your own back yard.
This entry is excellent!!!

Wing His Words
Great building of suspense. I loved this entry.

May God continue to fill your mind with words so your hands can write.
Congratulations. Happy Dance!