The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/18
This story has a lot of potential. The use of "deceased" and "expired" don't quite fit with the tone of the rest of the story. Personally, I prefer "died". The information about dogs smelling cancer is good. This is worth editing and perfecting.
This is a powerful story. It brought tears to my eyes. I'll admit, I'm a bit freaked out because my dog is always licking me, but it's a habit she's had since day one. You did a great job of writing on topic and delivering a clear Christian message. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!