The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever use of this week's topic. Glad the MC ended up with a match made in heaven.
Now THAT is a entrancing short story! Reads like a winner to me.
This is a great story. You grabbed me right away with your great mental pictures and smells. You threw in suspense and conflict to keep me to the very end. Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!