The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/18
You did a nice job taking the story from the book of Luke and made it life-like with your descriptive wording. Nice job.
07/27/18
I love this story! It paints a powerful picture of what it's really like to sacrifice for others, and the reward that follows when you obey.
07/28/18
Congratulations, Jenny. Your story was a tasty treat.