The Official Writing Challenge
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So well done,
great job with this.
Excellent job of releasing just enough information to lead the reader to the hook. I was surprised when I realized time and place,even though all the clues were laid out.
Brilliant. I didn't see it coming for quite a while. You brought the story to life in an incredibly realistic way.
I really liked the descriptive imagery. I also liked "A rooster declared...." Good story of the real account.
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Jack.

Your story was riveting and the ending was a fit conclusion.
Superbly written! I felt like I was there and felt the MC's anxiety. Congratulations!
Congratulations Jack! This is a moving recount of Peter's experience. You led us along skillfully, slowly revealing his identity and the scene. Great writing!
Wow! This is amazing. You did a great job depicting Peter's denial as if you were right there experiencing it with him. I could picture it in my mind's eye. Congratulations on a well deserved first place!